Читать книгу Loquela - Carlos Labbe - Страница 14

THE NOVEL

Carlos read each paragraph and then, emitting a soft tsk of his tongue, tore out the page. He’d been doing this for quite a while: he stared at the alarm clock on the nightstand; it was two in the afternoon. He was still wearing pajamas. The same confusion persisted that he’d felt when, upon waking, opening his eyes, and contemplating the ceiling, he’d run through in his mind the day that awaited him: revise the novel, write the missing parts, a final pass with a lead pencil or red pen, like a professor hurrying to correct his students’ exams. He hated having to visit those faraway albino girls again and again, to fire the fateful weapon that hurt no one, like he was writing a screenplay for a cartoon. He’d rather stay in bed, trying to recover the thread of what he’d dreamed in the middle of the night. He still retained a few images: an infinite castle that he couldn’t look away from, because his head was the only part of his body not buried in sand. And the epilogue, if he could call it that, when he came to a pleasant town where the sea’s freshness made him feel weightless. He went into a barbershop—not a stylist, nothing like that—and the barber, wearing the face of a childhood friend, greeted him with a joke. The door opened, a woman appeared whom he didn’t recognize, but who he knew to be his girlfriend because she hugged him, whispering that this was the way she was going to bring him back from the dead. And she kissed him. He recalled something the professor of his detective fiction class had said: death should not be taken lightly. Repeating this advice to himself, he went to his desk and took out the notebook that contained the novel. He read quickly: it was a holiday the day the man learned of the existence of the albino girl, that she was in danger, and that she’d come searching for him anyway. The streets were empty, so it was easy to watch her cross over, eyes fixed on him, paying no attention to the car approaching at full speed from the opposite direction.

He had the impression that there was nothing alive in this notebook. He asked himself if at some point this page—meticulously concocted with twists and turns and more twists and turns—might form part of a book, whether this machine of actions would cease. And he tore it out. He read the next one and the next. Always the same, fifty pages of chasing after a woman who reveals no clear reasons for why she’s being pursued. It was already two in the afternoon. He paused, reading over the ending: the protagonist didn’t react when a man shoved him. He left the bathroom, convinced he should confront the fat man behind the bar. He’d ask for a drink. And when the guy came over he’d warn him to stop playing games, he’d been found out. Stop calling the albino girl, no more men following her home or threatening him in the bathroom while he was washing his hands, he’d say, his voice grave. He made his way through the multitude that was moving euphorically to the sounds of a popular song. Suddenly the lights came down, a rush of couples holding hands descended on the dance floor. The protagonist was climbing the stairway to the second level when he stopped: on the dance floor, in a corner, he recognized the confident stride and preoccupied face of the albino girl. He stumbled his way back down, losing her for a second in the crowd; he had a hunch he’d find her near the exit. He grabbed her arm and asked her what she was doing there. The girl—blonde hair, straight back, tight dress—looked at him uncomprehendingly: it was someone else. He apologized, embarrassed by his mistake. Back on the stairs a bouncer blocked his assent; the police were clearing everyone out, something unfortunate had gone down between the fat bartender and a drunk with a broken glass. The bartender defended himself, they fought, there were blows, and the one stabbed the other. Carlos stopped reading. He thought that the protagonist, shaken by the coincidence, should’ve marveled at his luck, but he didn’t. Instead he shoved the bouncer who was describing the situation out of his way and went up to see with his own eyes what had happened, and ended up getting kicked out. The error was that his characters never noticed what was right in front of them and were instead always trying to see past it.

He stared at the pile of torn-out pages sitting on his desk. He became aware of the connection between that particular chapter and a phone call from Elisa that’d woken him up one Friday at six in the morning a few months ago. Her voice hesitated when she told him that she’d gone out dancing with her friends that night, after drinking all afternoon and reminiscing about existential discussions they’d had in high school. That night, at the club, they ran into one of her ex-boyfriends, and before long he and Elisa were conversing in close proximity, then he convinced her to dance. Just when she said yes, Elisa spotted him, Carlos, leaning on the bar, staring out across the dance floor. She shuddered and went over to him, but it turned out to be some random guy who tried to wrap his arms around her, proud of having seduced her with a single look. That morning Elisa, drunk, asked his forgiveness over the phone. She also told him that she was sure he’d appeared there in that instant to look out for her, to make sure she didn’t do something stupid.

The sound of the door being unlocked distracted Carlos and he got up and went to see who it was. Elisa walked in slowly, carrying heavy bags that she set down on the floor; she came over and kissed him. She made fun of the pajamas he was still wearing. Seeing the torn-out pages on the desk, she didn’t bother asking what had happened, she just went into the other room to find a box of paper clips. One by one she began putting the pages back into the notebook, trying to follow the order of the story, but Carlos grabbed her from behind and began to lightly bite the nape of her neck until she gave him her attention.