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The introduction below is not perfect, but it is fairly good. See how bad you can make it with the fewest changes and then compare your best effort to the online version.

For this challenge you are allowed to:

 Change the order of the sentences.

 Swap an existing sentence for one of the alternative sentences below.

 Create your own on-topic, grammatically correct but otherwise lousy alternative sentences (see the alternative sentence pool for ideas).

If you are to make it really bad in as few changes as possible, what are you going to target and why?

Essay title:

‘To what extent do Onorato and Turner (2004) critique the claim by Gaertner, Sedikes and Graetz that self-schemas are ‘‘monuments of stability’’ (1999: 5)?’