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Knowing what you want to achieve, being conscious of the background facts and aware of the recipient, you should be able to jot down the points you wish to make in your initial draft. For example, imagine you have received a letter of complaint about damaged goods delivered to a customer. Your company’s policy in such situations is to resolve the complaint as quickly and as fairly as possible, and to maintain the customer’s goodwill. Six of the 12 products were found to be damaged when their container was opened, and it is most likely that the carrier is to blame as goods are always checked before leaving your warehouse. The customer wants you to deliver replacement products and collect and credit him for these damaged items as soon as you can. A formal, matter-of-fact approach is taken by the customer in his letter to your company.

From this you can note various points for inclusion in your preliminary draft – ‘we want to apologise for the problem,’ ‘we wish to explain why it occurred,’ ‘we agree to your suggested solution,’ ‘we have set about resolving the complaint’ and ‘we want to apologise again’. Then sketch out a very rough-and-ready draft, jiggling it into an approximate order but not worrying too much about its appearance, layout or style at the moment. An example of this draft is shown in Letter 1.1.